Wow this story is great! by: Bailey The Horse Lover
I love this! I love mustangs and I love this story so far! I have read a lot of books about mustangs and I am so outraged by how people treat them! Keep writing your story! It is going great!
Feb 17, 2020 Rating
plz finish by: Anonymous
plz finish this story! i so need to know the end :):):):):):)
Jul 17, 2019 Rating
Hundreds of Horses by: Warhorse
Please continue! I really like it!
Nov 30, 2018 Rating
Love it! by: SpiritGirl
Please keep going, it's awesome!
Oct 09, 2018 Rating
Awesome! by: Anonymous
I love it, please keep going!
Sep 09, 2018 Rating
Part 5 by: hundreds of horses
Part Five
My head whirred with all that had just happened. I'd just fallen in love. My stomach knotted. I turned away, biting my lip. I hardly knew Liam. What was I doing?
"Feeling okay?" I nearly screamed as the voice behind me brought me back to earth.
"Oh, Dover! You scared me! Yeah, I'm alright." I studied Dover warily. This stallion had always had a thing for me, and I'd always brushed him off. I blushed scarlet, imagining his reaction to my feelings for Liam.
"That was a very admirable thing you did for Liam yesterday," Dover said, pricking his buckskin ears forward. I nodded, not knowing what else to do. "That must have taken some courage with Charger yelling at you like he was." Again, I nodded. Dover's smile suddenly dropped from his face. "Take care of that friend of yours too," he said. I inhaled sharply. Sky! I had almost forgotten about her loss through my own feelings! Shame washed over me, completely washing away all thoughts of Liam.
"I should go check on her," I said, hurriedly rushing off. I felt Dover's eyes on me as I speed walked off, and I rolled my eyes. "Can't you take a hint?" I murmured grumpily to myself. "I'm not interested in you!"
I halted and scanned the herd, searching for Sky. When I finally did find her, she was all by herself under the shade of a tall tree, her face red from crying. I rushed over to her, sorrow gripping my heart. "Sky," I started, but was soon cut off by Charger's thunderous cry.
"Men!"
Sep 03, 2018 Rating
I agree with Horses Rock This World!! by: Spiritgirl
Your story is amazing! I got hooked! Please write more!
Sep 02, 2018 Rating
Part 4 by: hundreds of horses
Part Four
Then next morning, I awoke to see Liam at my side. He grinned down at me. "Good morning." It took a huge effort not to laugh out loud.
His bright eyes pierced into mine. The kindness I found in them soon became unbearable, and I looked away. "What are you doing?" I asked, pricking my ears forward, a smile spreading across my face. Liam grinned back at me.
"Just staring at the beautiful mare that saved my tail yesterday," he said, going slightly red. I blushed and gazed at my hooves, not knowing what to say. "I just really appreciate what you did for me yesterday," Liam went on. "I know it mustn't have been easy, standing up against your lead stallion."
"I just couldn't let him send you away," I said, gazing into his eyes once again. They seemed like magnets, so intense, and nearly impossible to pull away from. Suddenly, Liam leaned down and nuzzled my cheek before turning away. I stood frozen to the spot, amazed at what had just happened. I'd just been nuzzled by a stallion. My heart began to pound heavily in my chest, and I suddenly felt light as air.
As I lowered my head to graze, I just couldn't get myself to swallow. My stomach felt as if it were alive with worms, wriggling through my digestive track. It was a slight tickle that I'd never experienced before.
I lifted my head and gazed across the terrain towards Liam, and my heart swelled. Only then did I truly realize, that I really was in love.
Aug 18, 2018 Rating
Horses by: crazy horse lover 🐴
Please continue. Best story ever 🙂
Jul 29, 2018 Rating
Part 3 continued by: hundreds of horses
Part Three (continued)
Only then did our lead stallion, Charger, notice Liam. He reared up, striking the air with his hooves.
"Wait!" I cried, dashing forward despite my exhaustion. Charger angrily landed his rear, his ears pinned.
"Get out of the way, Sasha!" he bellowed. I stood my ground.
"But, Charger, Liam's not a threat... He had his own herd taken from him by men, and is only looking for some protection..."
Charger glared at Liam, his eyes shining with hatred. "No stallion shall ever set hoof in this herd unless that stallion is me!" He reared up again. Liam blinked pleadingly at him.
"But, sir, I'll leave as soon as I find another herd. I just need some safety until then... Please." Despite his plea, Charger still wasn't moved.
"You will leave immediately!" His nostrils flared with fury. I gaped at him.
"But, Charger!" Charger glared at me with a look so intense, I took a half step backwards.
"Now you, young filly, will be in big trouble when this is all finished! Now, it'd be smart of you to hold your tongue. Must I remind you of who I am?" I grit my teeth with fury.
I knew that what I was about to do was foolish, suicide, even, but there was no stopping me, not even myself.
"And must I remind you of who I am? I am the filly that just saved your herd! If Liam, Sky and I hadn't come galloping, the herd would be penned and killed! And need I remind you that Liam, the stallion you want to send away, yes, Laim, played a part in saving the herd. How could you just send him away?"
Beside me, Liam stared at me, his mouth ajar. On my other side, Sky nodded, her eyes still red and puffy from sobbing. I shot my friend a thankful look for backing me up. Despite her obvious depression, my friend hadn't forgotten about my well being.
Charger's muscles trembled with fury. His eyes bulged, and his face grew red, then purple. He opened his mouth, looking ready to shout, when his mate interrupted him.
"Dear?" Gold Dust soothed. Charger stared at her, gazing deep into her mesmerizing, clam eyes. "Give the colt a chance." Charger stared at his mate a while longer, and slowly, the purple died to red, and the red died to his normal tone. Charger exhaled. The fury drained from his eyes, and his muscles relaxed. My stomach fluttered with hope.
"Fine," he surrendered. "The colt may stay, but only till he finds another herd."
My legs quivered with excitement. "Yes!" I cried, unable to keep in my cry of victory. "Oh, thank you, Charger! Thank you, Gold Dust!" Gold Dust flashed me an amused smile, and next to me, Liam gave me a look of pure thanks.
I smiled back at him, amazed at myself. Why had I stood up for him? I only just met him! His green eyes twinkled happily into mine, and a warm feeling washed over me, but I quickly pushed it away, startled at myself.
From behind, Sky gave me a sly, smug look, mingled with grief. Immediately, a flood of nerves rushed through me, sending my heart into a thrum. I gazed at Liam and blushed. Was I in love with this stallion?
