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Sep 26, 2013 Rating
Part 2 by: Anonymous
Thanks guys! Part 2 should come out soon!
Sep 22, 2013 Rating
love it! by: Sunbeams
You're really, really, really good! You have the best details and you leave just a little suspense that's very effective. Oh, I love it! Please, please, continue!!
Sep 18, 2013 Rating
great by: reina
it was quite great. It got me hooked immediately. You didn't make it too long; you just made it seem more interesting and a little suspenseful.
