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Nov 09, 2021
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Great Story!!!
by: Bailey The Horse Lover

Wow! This is so good! Keep writing it!!! I really want to know what happens!

Nov 02, 2020
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The rest of chapter 2
by: The Author

The men, however, where just down at the water's edge. I glanced back, and neighed, the call of the wild. One of the men pulled out a pistol; a sudden pain in my shoulder told me he had shot me. I made not a single sound, knowing that is I did so, the men would then follow me, sensing that they had hit me.

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About 1 hour later:

I hauled myself up the beach, snorting with pain. My shoulder was screaming for a rest, but I had to keep on going. I froze. I sensed a human behind me. As I slowly turned around, I saw this snake-like thing flying in the air. I reared, neighing, my hooves pawing the air. Then, darkness.

Smoke. Noise. The tight rope around my legs bit like sand in a cut, but I struggled up anyway. Voices drifted into my ears; human's voices. "Oh, I see that damn horse has got up,"
"Yep, real devil that one!"

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More coming soon!
Sorry I couldn't write before, what with Lockdown and Covid-19, I didn't have much time!!!

Aug 28, 2020
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Wow!!!
by: Horse crazy girl

This is amazing! Keep on writing this story! I want to read it! Five stars!

Jul 27, 2020
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Whoa!
by: annahorselover

This story is amazing!!! I love it!

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