I do love Little Black's perception of the world, I can easily see a horse looking at things like she does. It gets a bit confusing, though, between Mr. Bentson, Donkey, and Ron. There were a few places where quotes (") were missing, which made things a bit more mixed up. I still delight in Little Black's point of view. Keep it up! Happy writing!
Unicorn writer of: "More than a Myth" Intro, Part I, Part II
