This story is right up my street... I looove rescue stories :) Great story, though watch out for exclamation marks (!!). Virtually every sentence ends with one or two. Exclamation marks play a very important part in writing, but too many of them deadens the effect. Keep up the great work. Keep going - I can't wait to see what happens!
Unicorn writer of: "More than a Myth" Into and Parts 1 - 3
