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Oct 24, 2017
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LOVE IT
by: Eliza/horselover06

Please keep writing. This is super! I wanna be an author too.

Jan 20, 2015
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Thanks!
by: Katniss

Thanks Elizabeth! I like that idea. And I can't wait till your story comes out!! I still have a lot to do for my story so it won't come out for a awhile. Maybe, since we both want to be authors someday, we could help each other out with ideas for stories or give pointers to each other on how a spot in the story could have been done a little different. If it's okay with you. :)

Jan 19, 2015
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Well
by: Elisabeth

I may have one idea, the horse should have twins and one of them dies. I am working on a Summer story, but it might be a while before I try to post it. I can't wait 'til your next story comes out!!!!! It sounds way totally AWESOME!!!!

Jan 15, 2015
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Stories
by: Katniss

I totally want to be a writer when I get older too!!! I've written a lot of different stories (not all of them are about horses though because I also like to write stories about adventures on ranches with all sorts of different farm animals involved. And I really really like writing stories of where people where helped by an animal or where the people helped save the animals.. Anyways...)

I have only posted 2 stories on here so far but I'm thinking up a new one.... I think I'll call The Secret Horse or something. But it'll be about a girl who's father hates horses and won't allow any horse on his cattle ranch. (He hates horses because his wife was killed when she was thrown from a young gelding she had been training. His wife died when the girl was a baby.... ) Well, the girl really wants a horse.... And she ends up finding a wild mare hiding in a bush. The mare is giving birth and she is very very sickly. As soon as the foal is born , the mare dies. And, well, I won't spoil it for you....

Any thoughts to maybe add to the story?? : )

Jan 14, 2015
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Thx
by: Elisabeth

Thanks, I love to write! When I get a little older I want to be a published writer. I have written a story called Sure As Shootin', but I wasn't able to have the last part put on the website because my computer wasn't able send it. What other story have you written? Your stories keep me SO interested!

Jan 13, 2015
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Cool!
by: Katniss

Hi Elisabeth! Wow! You want to be a writer too? That's super cool!

Jan 11, 2015
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CRAZY GOOD!
by: Elisabeth

I know u said that u weren't gonna make another part but you have so many amazing thing left to put in the story! If-when u become an author I will totally buy every single epic one of ur books! I actually want to be an author too!
Anyway, ur story was so amazing I had to drop a comment! Keep writing! Look forward to seeing one of ur books soon!

Jan 11, 2015
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Realy Good
by: Anonymous

I really got into this story, I love the storyline :) well done

Jan 11, 2015
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Please tell me your thoughts!!
by: Katniss, the author

Please comment!! I'm a wanna-be-book-writer and I need feed back from my readers! Please give your honest opinion.... I'm okay with negative responses. But if you thought anything should have been changed or if anything should have been written differently I would really appreciate it. Thanks :)

Jan 11, 2015
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Jan 10, 2015
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Nice story story
by: Sydney from HorseCrazyGirls.com

I like the voice and the pace of this story. It's nicely written. I broke some of the paragraphs up to make it easier to read, but other than that well done!

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