Sweet! By the way the comment was from both my friend and I. I really can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
Jul 11, 2017 Rating
:) by: Whispers Promise
Thank you! I'm glad you like the story so far and thank you for the advice Hoofbeats and Kitty! I'm always happy to get tips to better my writing!
Jul 08, 2017 Rating
Wow! by: HorseCrazy16
Love this story!
Jul 05, 2017 Rating
really cool but... by: hoofbeats and kitty
That was really cool... but you jumped a bit too much in our opinion. Maybe try and explain a bit more how she felt when she was meeting the horses and stuff like that. Other than that, it was brilliant.
