That's good. In that case, amazing story! Please write more!
Jul 11, 2017 Rating
Thank you! by: Heartbeat for horses
Thank you everyone, I'm so glad you like it!
I'm sorry I haven't written another chapter. I've been preparing for a horse show and been on vacations and such. I will be writing another soon!
I will next week if I get time but I will be back into writing regularly after the 22nd! Look out for more chapters.
Thank you for all the advice and support!
Jul 06, 2017 Rating
Awesome by: Horselover13
Please write more, I really am enjoying the story.
Jun 26, 2017 Rating
... by: Heartbeat for horses
I'm not trying to copy in anyway. I've actually never seen or read Heartland. I actually got the name from one of the horses at the barn I ride at. Thanks for trying to keep this site safe though! :)
Jun 24, 2017 Rating
Wow! by: Amy
I really like your writing, and I'm looking forward to Chapter 2!
Jun 23, 2017 Rating
great! but... by: claudiahorselovr
It's such a good start, and its very original, but please don't copy from books, movies, and tv shows. I noticed the horse's name was Spartan, the same name from the horse from Heartland. Its such a good story, please don't ruin it! Other than that, its off to a good start, and I cant wait for more!