It doesn't sound bad at all. I think you aren't mean.
Hey, I'm ranchgirl and I'm asking youto visit my page. It's called ranchgirl's page and it's under Training stories. We can have fun answer questions about horses or chat about horses. I just put up a poll. The poll's about your favorite horse breed. Go to my page to vote for your favorite breed. See ya there!
Apr 28, 2011 Rating
Meanie me by: Lauren
Re-reading my own comment, I noticed it sounded mean and stuck-up. That's not what I meant. Sorry if you got the wrong message. I love your stories!!
Apr 15, 2011 Rating
Wild Horses by: ranchgirl (author)
The wild horses will be in the next part. This part was so long, I have to put the wild horses in the next part. I'm sorry if you wanted to hear something about the wild horses. Stay tuned for the next part!
Apr 15, 2011 Rating
Your story by: Unicorn
I just love the way you show us Kenzie and Monica's thoughts. They've both got different perceptions of what's going on and they're both flawed, which is great; a perfect character has nowhere to go. Please write more!
Apr 13, 2011 Rating
really good by: Lauren
One great characteristics of good stories is a change in the viewpoint. It really adds a good touch to your story. Also, what about the wild horses???????????????????? please write more, I really want to find out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!