I am not so talented and I need a lot of tips. Thank you for understanding. Look out for part 3 and 4!
Mar 25, 2011 Rating
great! by: jakiebabe
luv it! you should def write more! Don't forget to look out for Red-Part 6. Writing today!
Mar 22, 2011 Rating
Fast... by: Kaitlyn aka Horserider
It was a good story. But to be honest you seemed to be very quick. I mean reading the story, it seemed hard to follow. It was confusing! You had all those details but you put then on the page so fast it is a bit confusing!
Advice for the author: Expand your details. It does NOT have to be all in one BIG paragraph. Take you time, make sure you use proper punctuation marks. Can't wait until part 3!!!:)
Mar 21, 2011 Rating
Hi by: Doree
This story is really good, but I'd like to hear more about the lessons horses and other people. post part 3 soon!
