This is so good, I love to read good horse stories and I am looking forward to read more of this one! Keep on writing! I really like this!
Jul 12, 2012 Rating
Hi SahireRain (cool name!) by: Unicorn
Stunning! This is a compelling opening and I'm keen to read more. Well, well written! Watch out for typos here and there, but this is a great story. Please write on!
Unicorn writer of "El Cheapo"
Jul 11, 2012 Rating
Wow by: Horseluver4evernever
I LOVE your story!!! Keep writing, you've got a real talent!