I love it, there's something you need to use now when she is talking about the 10 horses she says something like... "She is the only thing her mom has...." that is something you can include in the story! Maybe, a sister, brother or even dad died? Great story! PART 22222222222222222222
May 26, 2011 Rating
WOW! by: Destiny - Horse - lovers page
You're a great writer!!! Please keep writing, and check out my page (READ and PLEASE comment! (i don't have a title yet)
