Hey Shine thanks for the comment on my story 'Where the wind blows' I love Blossom it's so AMAZING! I know its late to be writing this comment know but I wanted to read the whole series! You're a great author!
Apr 11, 2011 Rating
Hey Shine by: ranchgirl
I love your stories. Blossom is getting better and better by every part. Please write soon. I can't live without your stories. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
See ya later, Shine
Mar 31, 2011 Rating
My pleasure by: Unicorn
It's a great pleasure to help where I can. Writing is a lonely art, so feedback, however amateurish, can be quite a boost. Please write on!
Mar 20, 2011 Rating
Hi Unicorn! by: Shine
Thanks for your comment, and your tips. I'm having a hard time doing Laurel's speech as you can tell so I really would like to thank you for your tip.
Mar 18, 2011 Rating
Hi Shine! by: Unicorn
I loved your Apollo story and Blossom is even better! The plot is strong and I am still in love with Laurel and Aunt Florence. I would like to see a touch more description - we don't really know what Blossom, Jewel or Aunt Florence look like - but you're doing great. You did very well conveying Laurel's feelings as she rode Blossom. She's naturally a little uncomfortable with words and finds it quite hard to express her feelings (I noticed this from her dialogue; she's in sharp contrast to Aunt Florence) but you show us just how great the riding makes her feel.
Your style is compact, which is helpful for writers - we're constantly trying to conform to word counts, and often overshooting them by miles. "Blossom" is a brilliant story.
Oh, and pardon me... but if you like you could stop by my story, "More than a Myth", and drop a line if you like it. I think I'm going to put up a new one, anyways - "More than a Myth" isn't doing well at all.
Keep writing!
Mar 18, 2011 Rating
I did by: ranchgirl
I finished Tom already. If you want me to add more just let me know.
Mar 17, 2011 Rating
Hey Shine! by: Kaitlyn
You're welcome for the comment. I read your other two stories and also loved them! They are very unique.I will also read Apollo very soon!
Look at my story "Summer Camp Mystery-Part 2" when you get the chance.
Thanks for the great stories! :)
Mar 17, 2011 Rating
Hi Kaitlyn! by: Shine
Thanks for your comment. Please do check out my story Blossom. I also did "Apollo". Hope you enjoy!
Mar 17, 2011 Rating
Sure Ranchgirl by: Shine
You bet I'll check out your new stories but you're not finishing Tom? Come on! I love your stories Tom! Anyways thanks for your comment.
Mar 17, 2011 Rating
AMAZING!!!!!!! by: ranchgirl
I love it please write part 4 soon. Please check out my new story Dream Come True.
Mar 17, 2011 Rating
Nice by: Kaitlyn
I have never read your stories before... But i loved this one! So I'm going back to read part one and 2!:)
