It's so good! Keep writing and please post the next part up soon! I am hooked!
Mar 06, 2012 Rating
wow by: pony lover
can't wait for the next part. thanx for writing this it rocks!
Mar 05, 2012 Rating
good by: lucinda
good, quite short but good.
Mar 05, 2012 Rating
:) by: Gk99
This is starting to get more interesting. write on! Great second part!
Mar 04, 2012 Rating
NICELY DONE :) by: Katie
GREAT JOB! this is a GREAT story. in a typical story, they guy would be like, I LOVE THAT NAME, but sadly, i don't have a place for the horse. It sounds like you really like her... would you have her then.... they ride off into the sunset and live happily ever after. HOWEVER, this is not the typical story!! this story is mysterious, and very good!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!
