Can you make it a bit longer because the ending is a little too short for me.
Feb 24, 2015 Rating
amazing by: horsehitl283
You have to make another part I have to know the ending or I think I might scream.
Jan 10, 2015 Rating
CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!! by: Elisabeth
You totally have to make another part! I can't wait! What's gonna happen next?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I love that you added the whole family in this book, that's realy cool!!! This story is SUPER awesome and if you don't make another part... I'll DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jan 09, 2015 Rating
Rest of the story by: Katniss
Ooopppss... I didn't realize I forgot to put the last bit in. Sorry. Here it is ....
The bears were quickly lost out of sight as we raced after the 'runaway' horses. I could feel myself slipping off of Angel so I held on tighter to Eliza's waist. As we came around a clump of trees, we were suddenly confronted with Dad and Mom who were know on different horses than before. Kim brought Angel to a halt. Dad raised his eyebrows.
"I see you've got some horses on the loose.... They're over at the picnic spot." He said.
Mom gasped. "Celia!!! What happened to you?" She asked.
"Ya, and what's the meaning of racing around on the same horse?" Dad asked curiously.
After us girls had told them what had happened, we started back for the other horses.
"I can't believe you, Celia. You had an opportunity to shoot yourself a Rocky Mountain grizzly and you just ran away from that opportunity. " Dad sounded kind of upset. Of course he would be, he himself had always wanted to get a bear.... But hasn't yet. I smacked my hand against my forehead.
"Ugh! I totally forgot I even had a gun with us!!" I said, rather annoyed. Dad shook his head. "I can't believe you missed the opportunity. " He said with a hint of sadness in his voice.
Mom burst out laughing. And pretty soon .... We were all laughing. I wonder if all vacations are this adventurous?
The End
From Sydney at HorseCrazyGirls.com
That makes sense now! :)
Jan 08, 2015 Rating
Are you writing more? by: Sydney from HorseCrazyGirls.com
It just kind of ended. If you write more add it in the comments. :)
