I love this story! I will be watching for part 2! :)
Dec 23, 2010 Rating
Nice by: Anonymous
Nice story, Rayna (brilliant name, by the way). I already like your lead character, as well as Domino. I predict that this new convict will help them all escape!
The only problem I can see with your story is a few times you stumble over sentence transitions - forget a full stop or to capitalise the first letter of a sentence. But I know how it is... you're caught up in the story and you just zoom along, the writing is cool and you'll just have to fix those typos in the revisions.
