Amazing! I want to read more! As I have seen other people use in other comments, this story has the Wow Factor! It interesting because its written in the eyes of the horse, which I know many people are doing now. Its great! Write more!:)
Also please read my stories: Summer Camp Mystery, as well as Dreamer (The One and Only)
May 03, 2011 Rating
Thanks Everyone!!!! by: horseshoe
Thanks to everyone who comments on this page. Parts 2 and 3 will be coming in a while. Keep an eye out!!! I'll also do a rewrite based on comments. Thanks especially to Jess, my first commenter!!!!!!
May 02, 2011 Rating
Cool! by: Jess
This story has great potential. You could add a little more setting, though. Otherwise, awesome! Write more!
